Thursday 15 April 2010

Hedgehogs (Haiku)

The shuffling paws,
Defensive prickles of fear
Forcing me to flee.

Comment on my haiku - Hedgehogs ... I hope you like it, the second line is my favourite! =D

1 comment:

  1. That was a really sweet haiku! It made sense as well which is a bonus... Thanks for answering my question about my story on yahoo answers.
    (In case you don't remember.)
    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100525094701AAnvnUG&r=w

    This is the original on my website. Your poetry is great! Would you like it to be featured on my web site? All details are on the homepage. Thanks!
    http://sites.google.com/site/storybloggers/

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