Hedgehogs (Haiku)

The shuffling paws,
Defensive prickles of fear
Forcing me to flee.

Comment on my haiku - Hedgehogs ... I hope you like it, the second line is my favourite! =D

Little Pond (Haiku)

Another Haiku - This is called 'Little Pond'.

The shining water,
Little fish break the surface
As the green weed grows.

Please comment on it - before you do this is a HAIKU, it is meant to be short !!! :) Thanks

Shadows (Haiku)

Haiku's, for those who don't know, consist of 17 syllables (well, most of the time anyway) - they are Japanese and are usually set out in the style of 5 syllables to the first line, 7 syllables in the middle line and 5 again in the last. This is not always the case - but it is how I have chosen to present mine. I hope you enjoy my haiku ~ Shadows:

Rejected by light,
Overrun by the blackness,
Fearing the daylight.

Comment Please!